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Sunday, January 17, 2010

I'm a poet and I didn't even knoet!!

When I look around for a person I can rely on, a friend,
I quickly step back if this person will follow the trend...

Often while asleep, I take a walk into the past,
Only to find myself waking up last...

I asperse myself with these thoughts running in and out of my head.
Makes me wonder later if all this is real and if I am alive or I'm dead...

A little bold and a little scared,
I take pride in all that is spared...

Was I that bad a friend, so much that you all left me to my mercy.
Stranded, only to find you lovely people on the other side of the sea...

I could have been a much merrier person if only a couple of you didn't betray my trust.
Though splittng was my call, thinking of you, my friends is a must...

It is something I don't control.
My mind, I guess has gone for a stroll...

Did I demand much from you? Did I ask for anything more than friendship?
Tell me for once if I wasn't true...
That you still torment my thoughts draining the very life out of it with a whip...

The air smells fresh and sky looks clear now.
I know I have to jump across the fence. But how?

If being me promises a life of solitude isttead of solidarity,
I'll show the world I can still live it my way, without pity...

To all those people who gave up on me and to those who didn't think I was worth their time-
I'll not prove a point or my worth, for I know what I am made of. I will still reach my destination...

If you ever thought I was lazy,
I know I am. Also a little too crazy...

If relations are meant to be played with and if you think its a game,
I'd rather choose to move away, with a promise never to take your name.

After reading this, I know you'd probably curse me and give a stare.
I'd bother the least and all I want to say is "Please take care."



These lines are an excerpt of what runs in my mind. All credits to a few people who managed to leave a scar in my life.. I'll treasure them... I can’t promise forever, but will treasure them as long as I can.. Its a difficult job to keep it within myself. I will never take names. Rest assured...

~~Peace

R.o.H.i.T....

11 comments:

Raghu said...

Dude.. Following my Steps...? Lol...

devilzangel said...

ermm runnin a lil outa "torturous" comments :( hence il hvta tell d truth :( tht it ws a really nice poem :p expressed well :p awrite luks like my satanish comments r cumin back :p so b4 nethin like tht happens lol :p nice work :D:P

RoHiT said...

@ Raghu--> Dude, yeah.. just to make sure you fall off the cliff first..:P...kiddin' ;)..
@Booha-> Thanks! And I'm glad you didn't give any more of those satanic comments :D

angel from heaven said...

Well penned down.

Raghu said...

Lol.. I'l never fall though..:P

Sorcerer said...

good one buddy!! i liked it

√ij@y said...

GUD ONE.........
KEEP PENNING.....
:)

JON RAJ said...

dis shows d other side of ya !!!
- jonraj316.blogspot.com

Gyanban said...

It is tough to balance rhyme and content or intent and I think you ve done a good job.

Nalini Hebbar said...

analyze and change...that's my mantra too!...well tackled

RoHiT Iyer said...

@ Angel--> Thanks :)

@ Raghu--> A-haan!! I give you the chance to correct yaself.. bluffer!

@ Sorc--> Thank you :)

@ Vijay--> Thank you!

@ Jonny saar--> hehehe yeah.. one of the many sides:P

@ Gyanban--> Thank you :)

@ Nalini--> Should be everyone's mantra, shouldn't it be?.. thank you :)