It was someday last year and I was walking through thick vegetation on the city outskirts. Below is an account of what I witnessed.
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| Was a still and silent night indeed! |
That day was a still night.
I could actually hear their plight.
They roamed about in their robes all white,
While I struggled to move, with all my might.
They moved so fast, they were oh so bright!
I stood still in awe, watching that unbelievable sight!
Right then, my inner self speaks to me about the sight and he sighs.
Can't always be ghosts on a still night, they’re the fire flies! :D
~~Peace
R.o.H.i.T....
~~Day 18 of my blog-a-day for 22 days marathon. Memoirs of a Drunken Junkie shuts down on the 22nd of April :-)
24 comments:
ROFL..!!!!
lolll fireflies r kewttt :D, nice short poem :p
@ Raghu-- :D
@ Khushboo--> Yeah they are cute... thanks! :D
Thanks for the laugh!
LOL :D fireflies and ghosts, a well written verse! I enjoyed it! :)
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Fireflies!
Wondrous little tale.
welcome to poets rally.
wow.
beautifully crafted piece, the imagery is creepy and interesting.
lol! you made the ghosts laughed as well :)
@ K McGee--> I'm glad I made you laugh :)
@ Vinay, Kim, Morning--> Thank you :)
@ Bendedspoon--> haha seriously? whadaap to that! :D
the picture is splendid, this was interestingly cool, enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/linconnue-de-la-ribambelle/
very sweet. nice visual.
http//:geezergirl.org
:) great rohit! my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/
a fun post indeed :P
a fun post indeed :)
Laughing...Great!
@ Lynaima, Jeanne, Fiveloaf, Paulomi and Andy--> Thank you :)..
@ Alcina--> thank you :D.. yeah I shot it :)
this sort of reminds me of Poe.
if you take out the humor of course ;)
lovely.
http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/cassia.html
Poe? Seriously? Wow.. thanks :)
funny fireflies what a wonderful tale you have written here and so funny
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-972
I don't know but seriously i felt like something sort of this is coming :P
Nice write :)
fun one, smiles.
fun one, smiles.
Great write, a night you will never forget.
William
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