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Monday, April 18, 2011

Still Night!


It was someday last year and I was walking through thick vegetation on the city outskirts. Below is an account of what I witnessed.
Was a still and silent night indeed!


That day was a still night.
I could actually hear their plight.
They roamed about in their robes all white,
While I struggled to move, with all my might.

They moved so fast, they were oh so bright!
I stood still in awe, watching that unbelievable sight!
Right then, my inner self speaks to me about the sight and he sighs.
Can't always be  ghosts on a still night, they’re the fire flies! :D


ROFLMAO! :P 


~~Peace
R.o.H.i.T....


~~Day 18 of my blog-a-day for 22 days marathon. 
Memoirs of a Drunken Junkie shuts down on the 22nd of April :-)

24 comments:

Raghu said...

ROFL..!!!!

Devilzangel said...

lolll fireflies r kewttt :D, nice short poem :p

RoHiT Iyer said...

@ Raghu-- :D

@ Khushboo--> Yeah they are cute... thanks! :D

K McGee said...

Thanks for the laugh!

Vinay said...

LOL :D fireflies and ghosts, a well written verse! I enjoyed it! :)

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Kim Nelson said...

Fireflies!
Wondrous little tale.

Morning said...

welcome to poets rally.

wow.

beautifully crafted piece, the imagery is creepy and interesting.

bendedspoon said...

lol! you made the ghosts laughed as well :)

RoHiT Iyer said...

@ K McGee--> I'm glad I made you laugh :)

@ Vinay, Kim, Morning--> Thank you :)

@ Bendedspoon--> haha seriously? whadaap to that! :D

lynnaima said...

the picture is splendid, this was interestingly cool, enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/linconnue-de-la-ribambelle/

Jeanne said...

very sweet. nice visual.
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fiveloaf said...

:) great rohit! my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

Paulami said...

a fun post indeed :P

Paulami said...

a fun post indeed :)

Andy said...

Laughing...Great!

Alcina said...
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RoHiT Iyer said...

@ Lynaima, Jeanne, Fiveloaf, Paulomi and Andy--> Thank you :)..

@ Alcina--> thank you :D.. yeah I shot it :)

bttrflyscar said...

this sort of reminds me of Poe.

if you take out the humor of course ;)

lovely.

http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/cassia.html

RoHiT Iyer said...

Poe? Seriously? Wow.. thanks :)

Ann LeFlore said...

funny fireflies what a wonderful tale you have written here and so funny
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-972

Alcina said...

I don't know but seriously i felt like something sort of this is coming :P

Nice write :)

Morning said...

fun one, smiles.

Morning said...

fun one, smiles.

William Leed said...

Great write, a night you will never forget.
William